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-        <p>KarmaNotes empowers college students to participate in the free exchange of course notes, study guides, and other digial learning resources. By sharing knowledge on KarmaNotes, you will earn Karma Points and access to a growing database of academic resources.</p>
-        <p>Free (and advertising free), all content on KarmaNotes is also licensed Creative Commons and all of its code is <a href="https://github.com/FinalsClub/karmaworld">free and open source</a>. We also maintain full compliance with the Digital Millennium Copyright Act.</p>
-        <p>Like a public park or give-a-penny jar, KarmaNotes has the capacity for a near-limitless wealth of knowledge, curiosity, and karma. Beyond the ivory tower, KarmaNotes is a network with the potential to digitize education, one lecture at a time.</p>
-        <p>KarmaNotes is improving learning online thanks to support from the William and Flora Hewlett Foundation and generous scholars like you. Want to learn more? Please <a href="mailto:info@finalsclub.org?Subject=Karma%20question">contact us</a> or make a tax-deductible charitable donation to the FinalsClub Foundation.</p>
+        <p>KarmaNotes empowers college students to share course notes, study guides, and other digial learning resources online. By exchanging knowledge on KarmaNotes, everyone benefits from access to a growing database of knowledge.</p>
+        <p>All content on KarmaNotes is licensed Creative Commons and all code is <a href="https://github.com/FinalsClub/karmaworld">free and open source</a>. We also maintain full compliance with the Digital Millennium Copyright Act.</p>
+        <p>Beyond the ivory tower, KarmaNotes is a network with the potential to digitize education, one lecture at a time.  Like a give-a-penny jar, KarmaNotes collects knowledge for the common good. Best of all, our capacity is practically limitless, and withdrawals are entirely free. </p>
+        <p>KarmaNotes is improving learning online thanks to support from the William and Flora Hewlett Foundation and generous scholars like you. Want to learn more? Please <a href="mailto:info@finalsclub.org?Subject=Karma%20question">contact us</a> or support our mission with a tax-deductible charitable donation to the FinalsClub Foundation.</p>
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