From 0fdb4ce810ca18f10f76b042f417484a5e7736de Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrew Magliozzi <bobcall17@yahoo.com>
Date: Thu, 8 Dec 2011 16:26:13 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Changed paragraph two of that homepage text to what I
 mentioned in my last comment.

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 public/index.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/public/index.html b/public/index.html
index e35386a..0fd533f 100644
--- a/public/index.html
+++ b/public/index.html
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 							Welcome to FinalsClub.org.  We provide tools to help college students collaborate in realtime on class notes and hold live scholarly discussions with their peers and instructors.
             </p>
 						<p>
-							A network starts with a single student in any given lecture.  When more contribute to the cause, we will see how quickly we can transform education together, one classroom at a time.
+							A single user can begin a lecture on FinalsClub, but the best results occur when everyone contributes to common knowledge. Working together we can transform higher education, one classroom at a time.
             </p>
 					</div>
 				</div>
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