From: Seth Woodworth <seth@sethish.com>
Date: Wed, 7 Dec 2011 05:56:42 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Updating homepage intro text
X-Git-Url: https://git.librecmc.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=eb371159e70a4d18338d2cd8afc44acd0469463f;p=oweals%2Ffinalsclub.git

Updating homepage intro text
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diff --git a/public/index.html b/public/index.html
index e9808ad..dd8cd3a 100644
--- a/public/index.html
+++ b/public/index.html
@@ -73,10 +73,11 @@
 				<div class="grid-10 grid-centered">
 					<div class="padded-loose">
 						<p class="no-top-margin">
-							FinalsClub provides a tool to collaborate during class on realtime lecture notes <a style=“display: none;”>video</a> and to ask questions which are juried by your peers<a style=“display: none;”>video</a>.</p>
+							Welcome to FinalsClub.org.  We provide tools to help college students collaborate in realtime on class notes and hold live scholarly discussions with their peers and instructors.
+            </p>
 						<p>
-							Getting started is easy.  Just register with your school email address and confirm
-							your account.  Then find your courses or add a new one.</p>
+							A network starts with a single student in any given lecture.  When more contribute to the cause, we will see how quickly we can transform education together, one classroom at a time.
+            </p>
 					</div>
 				</div>
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