Changed paragraph two of that homepage text to what I mentioned in my last comment.

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                                                        Welcome to FinalsClub.org.  We provide tools to help college students collaborate in realtime on class notes and hold live scholarly discussions with their peers and instructors.
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-                                                       A network starts with a single student in any given lecture.  When more contribute to the cause, we will see how quickly we can transform education together, one classroom at a time.
+                                                       A single user can begin a lecture on FinalsClub, but the best results occur when everyone contributes to common knowledge. Working together we can transform higher education, one classroom at a time.
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